Applying for the QC/Proofreader position - OPEN

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Proofread the following passages and make a new post in this board with your results once you've finished.

Even if you fail this test the first time around, you are more than welcome to attempt it several times - just be sure to make a new topic. 100% accuracy isn't entirely necessary, but we expect that all applicants have a strong grasp of English grammar rules, WHICH I DON'T, LAWL. But hey, that's why we have QCs.

Test #1, typeset comic page
Difficulty: Moderate

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Instructions
Check over the page for typos, as well as consistency and grammatical errors.
Make note of awkward-sounding passages and rephrase them if possible.